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BTW Nice job, the lighting is pretty cool
I still think Lynne's expression could be a bit better. She's supposed to be fiery and tenacious, but she looks more deranged than anything else... Jowd's face is also a bit odd. It's too long.
On the positive side, the shading is incredible and you have a very good grasp of human anatomy. I think I can learn a lot from this picture.
So in summary: you should work on your human faces, but you are still a very good visual artist.
But what do I know? I've only uploaded one picture that I can really say is good. >_>
For one, I looked up "Sinking Submarine" thinking of Ghost Trick...And THIS came up.
The lighting and the effects are simply brilliant, to be honest. You really caught the essence of the moment at hand.
To be honest, however, it would've been better if you had added Sissel instead of Yomiel, or both of them altogheter, however, this isn't dismissed from a masterpiece.
I did originally have Sissel in the early drawings, but as I began working up the picture I had to cut him out cause he didn't work in the composition.. I do regret doing that mind you, heheh.